“Oh my god!!!! Today got ABC class…… I do not like that lecture. That person again…… I not like have the classes with him/her.” I believe that everyone must have the classes that are detest because of some reason. Of course, I am not be except too. I also have some type of classes that I detest, because of class with bad lecture, bad surrounding, and bad timing.
I do not like the classes that have the bad lecture, because some lectures have the bad teaching skill. For example, when the lectures teaching they speak very fast without consider the students and cause the students cannot catch up and cannot understand what are they teach. Student will very confuse and until them cannot solve their own equation. Furthermore, some lectures that have the bad attitude also make me detest the classes. For instance, some lectures always late to the class and even cancel the class with private reason. This may cause the student cannot catch up the syllabus and have not enough time have the preparation for the exam. Some of the lectures that have the bad-temper also cause me detest the class, because the lecture will feels annoyed anytime and the students will feel afraid and very stress during the class.
Moreover, the other reason is the class with bad surrounding. For example, the bad classmates always make me detest the class because they are very noisy during class and always disturb other. In the other hand, some classmate who is playful, rowdy, and rebellious also make a lot of trouble for the lecture and cause the class cannot be continue. In addition, the classroom that with bad air-con, the light was dim, uncomfortable chairs and tables make the student cannot concentrate during the class. The worst classroom is we can found the chewing gum stuck on or under the table, it was very dirty and unhygienic!!!!
Other than that, the classes with bad timing always make me detest the class. A classic example, the consecutive classes that up to 6 hours without any long term break always cause the student cannot concentrate during the class, because they are totally exhausted and does not have any more energy to continue the lesson. Furthermore, the classes that held at 2 p.m. also not a good timing for study, because the student just eat and feel tired after lunch they have no spirit to study.
In conclusion, a good learning condition is very important to a student, because the student will be more concentrate on study. Indirectly, the student will perform well in the exam. So, class with a good lecture, classroom with the best facility and good timing should consider for the students.
Dearest Ribena,
ReplyDeleteThe main ideas are all valid and systematically arranged with proper thesis statement and also topic sentences ^^ the examples given are also good and really support what you said.
Good! ^^
But just some grammar reminders ^^ hehe
After modal verbs ex: will, may, can, could, should, might, shall, must. etc, there will be another verb and that verb must be in the base form means no s, ed, ing ya.. Ori...
Also remember that the subject and verb must agree, if subject is singular, verb must be singular too. for ex: classmates who is should be who are because the subject is classmates...
and if we use verb in ing, in front 100% must have is/are/am ya :)
Do remember all these rules and I am so sure you will be able to write an error free and super interesting essay ^^
Luv,
Ms Jasline